Barb Heath: Haiku 2

Posted: under Guest.
Tags: Barb Heath, rainFebruary 24th, 2010

a languorous rain

drums its fingers on my sill

and cries itself out

….Read more of Barb Heath’s haiku.

….And be sure to check out her haiku on Twitter.

Older Posts | Newer Posts

4 Comments »

1

Nice! Love the sound of the word “languorous” and it fits so well here.

Comment by Sarah — February 24, 2010 @ 5:47 am
2

I, too, was planning to comment on the use of the word “languorous.” Its lovely!

Comment by Kelly — February 24, 2010 @ 8:35 am
3

Ah, it’s raining today so it’s especially nice to read this haiku today. Rain is such a release and I love how the last line portrays this. This poem has such a wonderful mood.

Comment by Alison — February 24, 2010 @ 12:58 pm
4

I spent a long time with a thesaurus before I settled on “languorous!” I still think it’s the only word that says *exactly* what I want here.

Comment by Barb — February 26, 2010 @ 9:48 pm