Barb Heath: Haiku 5

hot, freshly showered

i step onto the iced street

and turn into steam

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5 Comments »

1

I like all the water images and words. Hopefully all our ice will soon melt! Come on, spring!

Comment by Kelly — February 28, 2010 @ 9:15 am
2

I love this haiku. It feels young, contemporary and just exudes life. “Turn into steam” is really a fantastic image and I love the contrasting temperatures.

Comment by Alison — March 2, 2010 @ 4:05 pm
3

Amazing as always!

Comment by Collin — March 6, 2010 @ 7:33 am
4

Thanks, guys! I love going out right after a hot shower–it’s the only time I’m not cold during the winter!

Comment by Barb — March 17, 2010 @ 5:29 pm
5

i like the way the contrasting temperatures are wrought here

Comment by Gillena Cox — March 31, 2010 @ 9:22 am