Aug 24

F U Haiku by Beth Quinlan & Perry Taylor

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by Kelly

by Kelly

Haiku poets of yore used the measured three-line form to express moments of quiet clarity. Today, though, writers are using haiku to express all sort of emotions, including rage.

Enter F U Haiku, a new collection of 5-7-5 haiku written by Beth Quinlan and Perry Taylor.

Roughly 200 poems are gathered in its pages. Each one is filled with bitterness and spite. These “pissy poems” (as they are described in the introduction) are aimed at everything from traffic jams to taxes to bad waitresses to bonus-taking bankers.

This one aimed straight for the airlines:

Flight to France canceled

All I got was this lousy

Voucher. What the F * * * ?

While I bleeped out the swear word here, the book doesn’t.

And, of course, you can’t have a collection of angry little poems without including several on the topic of “my ex sucks.” Like this one:

You told your friends I

Sucked in bed. I proved you wrong

One friend at a time.

I was hoping that F U Haiku would be funny in a sarcastic sort of way. And it was, I guess.

But after reading through the whole thing, that’s not the vibe I got. Instead, I felt overwhelmed by anger. I wasn’t angry, but I felt like the writers definitely were — which perhaps I should have picked up on from the title. But to be totally honest, all that anger was a turn off.

It was a bit like watching the polarized pundits on some political talk show take swings at one another. Their bickering holds your attention for a while, but then it gets to a point where they are just so obviously enraged that you can’t stand to watch them anymore.

Maybe I would have been better off only reading two or three F U Haiku at a time. Maybe then these “pissy poems” would have stuck me as funny as opposed to resentful and irate. But since I didn’t …

If you’re looking to get yourself worked up into a tizzy, let me know. I’ll send you my copy of F U Haiku.

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Aug 12

Caribbean Kigo Kukai and Modern Haiku

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by Alison

by Alison

I’ve been thinking about poetry lately.

Where do I want to go with haiku? What new areas do I want to explore? And specifically, do I want to stay exclusive with 5 - 7 - 5?

Then I happened upon the results of the fifteenth Caribbean Kigo Kukai haiku contest hosted by Gillena Cox and I became inspired.

The haiku in this contest are of the modern shorter variety. There is no strict 5 - 7 - 5 syllable count in these poems. Rather, the poems contain a kigo (seasonal reference) and most contain a break. In less than seventeen syllables!

The fifteenth Caribbean Kigo Kukai features the word “umbrella” as a prompt and it is interesting to read the variety of haiku that come out of using this word.

Here are a few that struck me.

This one, by Magdalena Dale, spoke to me with it’s simple universal appeal.

Red umbrella -
the sounds of rain drops
around us

I can imagine the color red and the music of the rain working together for this beautiful moment.

This one, by Bill Kenney, won first place.

summer rain
my umbrella
unopened

I love the brevity of language in this one while at the same time it says so much. The whole idea of contrasting caution with joyful spontaneity is so appealing. And in only 10 syllables!

This one, by Catherine J. S. Lee, won second place and is another favorite.

after divorce court –
still, she offers to share
her umbrella

I love how this one gets personal (we like to do that here at Haiku By Two) and I appreciate the way Lee melds the personal with the seasonal. It’s real and contains emotion and yet the emotion is grounded by nature. Fantastic!

Thanks to Gillena for hosting a wonderful Caribbean Kigo Kukai that has inspired me so! And keep checking the site. New contests with different kigo are posted on a regular basis. I hope to try my hand at the shorter haiku sometime soon although I must admit I am not sure where or how to start. If you have any suggestions, please share them in comments!

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Aug 03

Haiku Review: Kashi Frozen Meals

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by Kelly

by Kelly

I have a confession to make: sometimes I eat frozen dinners.

I know boxed and frozen food isn’t the best meal choice in the world, but sometimes I just can’t get it together to chop my own vegetables. And frankly, I know I’m not alone. The frozen food aisles aren’t stocked with options beyond options just for little ol’ me.

A few months back, in my ongoing quest to find a healthy frozen meal, I purchased a few boxes of Kashi brand dinners.

The brand promotes itself as a health-conscious alternative and since I’m a fan of Kashi cereal (I love Kashi Honey Sunshine cereal so much that I don’t allow myself to buy it anymore), I decided to give the frozen entrees a try.

Imagine my surprise when I got them home and noticed that not one, but all three, had a haiku printed on the box!

There on the side, next to the UPC code is a haiku that reads:

Seven whole grain meals

Awaken all my senses

Warm and delightful

The haiku is the same on every box whether I’m eating Pesto Pasta Primavera or Sweet & Sour Chicken (neither of which I like as much as the Honey Sunshine cereal). Included next to the haiku is an explanation as to why it is there:

“Haiku are expressions of complex ideas distilled into simple words. They serve as metaphors for the richly complex flavors crafted from Kashi’s honest ingredients.”

While that is nicely said and all, it doesn’t answer my questions, which are — Which Kashi employee came up with the idea to stick a haiku on the side of the box? And why?

Is there a lover of haiku lurking in the Kashi marketing department? Or in the packaging department perhaps?

Or maybe it’s the CEO of Kashi him (or her) self!

And how much convincing of the marketing/packaging/upper management staff did it take to make sure that the haiku ended up there?

And why isn’t the Kashi haiku printed on Kashi cereal boxes? Why do Kashi frozen dinners get haiku when Kashi granola bars don’t?

These are burning questions, people!

I wonder whether or not an email submitted to the Kashi “contact us” page outlining all of my haiku inquiries would be answered . . .

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Jun 28

Berry Blue Haiku - A New Online Haiku Magazine for Kids

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by Alison

by Alison

***Update: Readers now have a chance to win a subscription to Berry Blue Haiku. Just leave a comment below by Friday, July 16th and you will be entered in a random drawing.***

Oh, here is something that is not to be missed! The very first issue of Berry Blue Haiku is now out and on the virtual newsstands. Berry Blue Haiku is a new online haiku magazine created with kids in mind. The whole presentation - the haiku, the artwork - is simply stunning so be sure to take a look and enjoy.

The brainchild behind Berry Blue Haiku is the wonderful Gisele LeBlanc of Cobalt Crow Productions and Reflective Ink, a favorite poetry blog of mine.  And so I was curious to know how Gisele thought up and pulled together this incredible project. Here’s what Gisele has to say about poetry, children and the publishing process:

cover art by Joy Nelkin Wieder

cover art by Joy Nelkin Wieder

How did you come up with the idea for this magazine?

I ran another small online magazine for children a few years back–it was called Dragonfly Spirit. We ran fiction, poetry, and nonfiction articles on poetry and art. That was when I took notice of haiku.

Then about a year and a half ago, I started focusing on writing poetry, and learned more about haiku. I absolutely fell in love with the form and couldn’t seem to get enough of it.

I had been thinking about starting a poetry magazine and realized that there was no haiku magazine out there targeted toward kids.

And that’s when the seed began to sprout. :)

Who is your target audience? Kids, yes, but I’m also thinking parents and teachers?

Yes, although the magazine is dedicated to kids, it’s also targeted toward teachers and parents who have an interest in or want to learn about haiku. We’ll be featuring articles and lessons on writing haiku that can be used both at home and in the classrooms. We want the magazine to inspire young and old alike.

You are accepting submissions at Berry Blue Haiku. Are you looking for submissions by children or adults?

The first issue contains material primarily by adults, but now that we are live, we are involving kids, too. In the magazine we are running haiku contests and challenges for kids and all entries, as well as miscellaneous submissions, will be considered for publication.

Initially, we had decided to run our contests/ challenges for children up to age 13, but we have decided that we will also welcome entries from students ages 14 - 18 (under a separate category).

What do you think children can learn from haiku?

I think haiku can help children see the beauty in simple moments. It can help foster an appreciation and reverence for nature. It’s also a wonderful form of expression, can be very therapeutic, and is a perfect introduction to poetry. And, learning to say what you want in so few words is also a great way to practice writing and language skills.

The first issue of Berry Blue Haiku is free. For a limited time yearly subscriptions (4 issues) can be ordered at a reduced rate of $3.49 and then after June 30th at the regular rate of 4.99. The next issue will be out on September 15th.

If you are interested in submitting your poetry, writing or illustrations to Berry Blue Haiku you can get more information here.

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May 20

The Elegance of the Hedgehog by Muriel Barbery

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by Kelly

by Kelly

I wasn’t expecting haiku when I sat down to read The Elegance of the Hedgehog, a novel by Muriel Barbery.

I was, though, expecting a captivating read. Two acquaintances — from two different circles — had recommended the title to me. Based on their words, I picked up the book months ago, but it wasn’t until just recently that I got around to reading it. As promised, it was an original, thoughtful read that totally hooked me. That haiku played a part in the plot was a wholly unexpected bonus.

So here’s a basic run down of the characters and conflict. Renee is, by her own admission, cantankerous, short, ugly and plump. She is the concierge at a high-priced, highfalutin, Paris apartment building. The tennants are rather dismissive. Most pay her little mind, which is exactly how she likes it. Renee is a closet intellectual. She believes in Anna Karenina, still life paintings, philosophy and the depth of a certain Japanese film maker. She’d rather chill with her cat and pursue her own interests than deal with the capricious demands of her tennants.

Paloma is a 12 year-old girl whose family lives in Renee’s building. Paloma is not a fan of her family. She dislikes her father, her mother, her cats, and she especially dislikes her older sister. As Paloma sees it, her family members are only concerned with their own feelings and status. They don’t recognize the abundant beauty in this world. For this reason, she has decided to teach them a lesson by killing herself. Paloma has decided that she will do the deed when she turns 13.

Until then, Paloma has decided to compile all of her most profound thoughts in a journal. Because she is an avid reader of Japanese comic books, studies Japanese at school, and in interested in Japanese culture, she has decided that each of her journal entries should contain either a haiku (which she defines as 3 short lines) or a tanka (which she defines as 5 short lines).

Of all Paloma’s haiku and tanka, this one was my favorite:

Grammar

A stratum of consciousness

Leading to beauty

Because I’m a loud and proud grammar nut, this haiku spoke to me. How true! And how succinctly put! I even went so far as to write it on a post it and stick it above my desk.

But back to the story. What’s going to happen to this 12 year-old girl dreaming of suicide? And what about the secretive, intellectual concierge? Well, someone new moves into their apartment building — a wealthy Japanese man. Given their individual interests in Japanese culture, both Renee and Paloma are drawn to him. And he, in turn, is drawn to them. Will his friendship offer both women a way out of their current isolation? Will they discover they’ve been sharing a roof with a soul mate all along?

One of the things that pulled me through this book was that its characters continually observed and ruminated on tiny beauties — like grammar. Or a cup of hot tea. Or still life paintings. Or camellias. All this attention lavished upon the daily prettiness that we so often dismiss struck me as very haiku. Which, besides the actual haiku included in the book, is why I so wanted to write a review of The Elegance of the Hedgehog here on Haiku By Two.

Now that Haiku By Two is well in to its second year, I catch myself lingering over tulips or staring at frost on a window. I discover myself discovering the tiny beauty all around me and it makes me happy. It makes me feel present and appreciative.

And I sensed, while reading The Elegance of the Hedgehog, that its characters –and its author — felt this way too.


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May 02

Hot Flash Haiku by Jennifer Basye Sander and Paula Munier

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by Kelly

by Kelly

I’m not exactly the intended audience for Hot Flash Haiku. I mean, I’m not even 40 yet.

Nevertheless, I picked up a copy of the book, which is filled with 5-7-5 poems on the topic of “la meno,” as it is called in Mexico.

With such a catchy title and a clever theme, how could I pass it by? Surely whatever was inside would make me smile.

I wasn’t disappointed. I snickered my way through the five chapters titled denial, anger, bargaining, depression and acceptance.

While many of the poems were certainly geared toward women older than me, there were many that resonated with me. Like this one:

I pluck, tweeze, shave, wax.

Worse than dealing with crabgrass.

Argh — always grows back.

And even though most of the haiku in this book poke fun at middle age and menopause, plenty ruminate on the meaning of life.

Like this one:

There are days when life

seems so beautiful that all

I can do is cry.

A few times, the authors lined up several haiku that all started with the same first line. One of those repeated first lines was “I swore I’d never.”

This seemed a fine writing warm up and I noted it as something I’d like to try the next time I’m facing a severe case of writer’s bloc, which–sadly–comes along more often than I care to admit.

The book is pint sized. It’s not a novel, but a gift book instead. And it was wholly fun to read. It’s just the kind of thing that one girlfriend should give to another.

Or that you should bring to your next girl gathering — you know, one where there will be lots of wine, lots of laughs, and no men.

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Mar 18

See Me, Hear Me, Read Me

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A belated Happy International Women’s Day!

Celebrated annually on March 8th, International Women’s Day is a global holiday that recognizes the achievements and life experiences of women worldwide. In honor of the holiday, this year a group of women have come together to show solidarity and express their individual voices through the medium of haiku.

See Me, Hear Me, Read Me is a compilation of haiku written by international women. Published by ActionAid of the United Kingdom, ActionAid is a nonprofit that works to eradicate poverty worldwide. The book includes contributions from well-known women such as Julie Walters, Yoko Ono and Dame Judi Dench along with other inspiring women of whom ActionAid has worked with around the world.

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The writers come from diverse backgrounds, ethnicities and are at various life stages. Although I have not ordered the book yet, the sneak peaks that I have gathered around the internet have me intrigued.

Here is one haiku by Judi Dench, simple and telling in it’s message:

Girls are not allowed

To go to school, only boys

Girls work, girls sweep, girls weep

And here is one by Julie Walters, which clearly illustrates the theme of unity between women:

Woman not invisible

I see you, we hear your pain

we are the women.

Here is another by P. Chandrakala, a 23 year old HIV positive single mother and activist from India:

Not respected in society, burdens

HIV positive women isolated

unite and fight for our rights.

The challenges that women across the globe face are vast and complex and it is fascinating to see how completely fitting is the ancient Japanese poetic tradition of haiku for a compilations such as this. Haiku is approachable and direct, with little room for excesses. It has also become a poetic tradition with an international following that is familiar on some level to many. What a wonderful way to demonstrate unity between women!

You can order See Me, Hear Me, Read Me directly through Actionaid.

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Mar 11

Haiku Author Interview: Randy Howe

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by Kelly

by Kelly

Having worked as a classroom teacher myself, it’s no mystery I was drawn to Teacher Haiku, a book of seventeen syllable poems about the experience of being a teacher.

To learn more about the book, I contacted author Randy Howe with a series of questions about the intersection of teaching and haiku. Here’s what he had to say.

What do teaching and haiku have in common?

I think that the teacher and the haiku poet have a lot in common, actually. There are many reasons why each might not accomplish their goal. If the teacher (or poet) does not have a lot of faith in the audience, she or he might overstate what is better left understated.

The best lessons and poems leave the lion’s share of the work for the students/readers.

For example, a teacher, or a poet, introduces an idea and then asks the audience to contribute to that idea, either by connecting to a personal experience or by exploring it further.

The teacher, of course, checks for understanding in his or her students while the poetry reader is left to his or her own devices. The poet can reread his or her haiku, but will never really know what kind of an impact each poem makes on readers. Teachers have more of an idea, between testing scores and conversations with former students. I like the latter so much more than the former!

The topic of “haiku” seems to be something most students have come across at some point in their school career. Why do you think the topic of “haiku” is popular among teachers as part of a lesson plan?

I am a special education teacher and one part of my job is modifying assignments. The most common modification is chunking long-term projects and assignments into smaller parts. This makes the material much easier to digest and goes a long way to alleviating student stress.

Much the same, haiku are brief and more palpable than, let’s say, the epic Greek poems. They offer a glimpse of an emotion, situation, or scene. Year in and year out, I see teachers successfully introduce students to poetry with acrostic poems and haiku.

I teach high school now, but taught at the elementary level for five years and nothing made the kids happier than to write a haiku and then illustrate it. Plus, they like learning a little bit about Japan. For my high schoolers, nothing beats manga. Graphic novels have become an essential tool in teaching literacy to students who are struggling and I guess there’s just something intriguing about the Far East!

A lot of the haiku in this book rely on a certain insider’s knowledge, so to speak, of what goes on inside a classroom. They were obviously written from a teacher’s perspective. Should more teachers engage in writing haiku?

My immediate reaction is yes. And then on second thought, I say, “Double yes!”

I think that teachers should write about teaching, whether it’s in haiku or journal entries. There has to be some release from the day-to-day stress, and teachers should definitely reflect on their art.

When revising, I had to take a harder look at how I felt about what I was saying. Whereas the first draft of many of my haiku were harsher than I intended, later drafts better captured my feelings about things like new computers arriving without keyboards, parents who seemingly ignore the fact that their child is not my only student, and kids more interested in daydreaming than listening to me.

At the end of a hard day, these annoyances can seem like mountains. On a Saturday morning, while drinking coffee in my pajamas, they seem more like molehills which is, of course, exactly what they are. It’s good for teachers to write about what they are experiencing and then go back and re-examine their observations and feelings.

Then they can more accurately categorize what is happening to them in the classroom and the decisions they subsequently make. For those whose chosen format is haiku, the benefit is being forced to cut to the chafe. This is probably true for all professions, pushing aside the inessential to get to what really matters.

The haiku in this book pick up on so many tiny school-year details. Did you write these haiku over the course of the school year or did you write them in the “off season”?

I am able to do a lot of my professional writing over the summer vacation, but “Teacher Haiku” was written during the winter of 2008. I started messing around with the essential topics in early December and by the time the holiday vacation rolled around, I was ready to write.

Deciding on subject matter was a lot easier than composing the haiku! I had never written haiku before, but like most people I thought, “How hard could this be?” Well, it’s hard. I still reread many of them and see how they could be better. I also know that in all too many instances, I wrote sentences rather than joining fragments and painting pictures.

But I do feel I was successful in capturing the life of a teacher over the course of a school year. After sixteen years of teaching, I know what March feels like, even in December. It feels long!

But there is a light at the end of the tunnel and not just the light of summer vacation. You see how your kids have grown since the beginning of the year. The hardest thing for me was sharing both discouragement and hope in just seventeen syllables.

Do you ever write haiku that aren’t about school?

I hadn’t written a haiku before “Teacher Haiku” and I haven’t written one since! I really love this book, though, and I loved writing it. Really, from that first step, when I was jotting down the essential topics, to the process of revising, it was a great experience for me. If I’m not learning, I’m not living. So, this new experience fit the bill.

There’s a guy who writes haiku about his beloved NY Mets, so maybe there is a market for sports haiku. I’ve also thought a nice hostess gift would be a collection of haiku about parties. I think that teaching is probably the most serious topic I would ever tap for poetry.

The most fun I had with this book was when I was writing in a humorous style. I just feel more comfortable in that zone. I’ve never been one to sit around the staff lounge, bitching and moaning about how awful everything is. I like my glass half full.

What are you working on now? Is there a book of “summer vacation haiku” in the works?

Ahhhhh, summer vacation. I think that a book about parenting and having fun with your kids might be in order. I can’t wait to hang out with my son and daughter again—all day, every day!

Recently, I finished revising “One Size Does Not Fit All,” a book I edited for Kaplan. It’s a collection of teacher stories, all with a focus on diversity in the classroom. It will be out in June and I can’t wait to see the response. It’s timely subject matter and the writing is really topnotch. Contributors include teachers from coast-to-coast, as well as Canada. There’s even a 9/11 piece from an American woman who was teaching in London at the time.

I am also looking forward to “1001 Smartest Things Teachers Ever Said,” which was just published by Globe Pequot Press. This is more of a gift book, so it should be on a lot of bookstore tables this spring.

I’ve been doing a fair amount of writing for my blog, and I’ve also been honing my skills as a Tweeter. And, of course, I’m counting the days till summer. Ahhhhh, summer vacation!

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Mar 01

Teacher Haiku by Randy Howe

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by Kelly

by Kelly

Once a teacher always a teacher.

While it’s true that several years have passed since I made my living in the classroom, I’ll never be able to shake certain teacher sensibilities. I still think in terms of “school years.” I still rip articles out of newspapers and magazines because I see their lesson plan potential. When I ran across a copy of Teacher Haiku at my local bookstore, of course I had to buy it.

Randy Howe, the book’s author, is a teacher himself, and the haiku in this little gift book are chronologically arranged according to the August-June calendar.The first haiku bemoans the loss of summer vacation while the last haiku celebrates the very last day of school.

In between are haiku about curriculum maps, staff meetings, report cards, standardized tests and kids who miss school to go on vacation.

Which brings up an important issue. These haiku are not meant for students. They were not designed to be part of a lesson plan about poetry, vocabulary or Japan.

Instead, these haiku are for teachers. This one asks a question I often wondered while teaching:

If I give feedback

and students don’t listen do

I still make a sound?

And this one speaks volumes of truth:

The tables have turned

Homework is more work for me

than it is for them

This haiku brought a smile to my face, along with many memories of my days as a middle school teacher:

I will never be

too harried or too old to

chaperone a dance

Ahhh. The school dance. Always an eye-opening and entertaining experience! Maybe I can find an upcoming one to crash . . .

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Feb 23

Haiku: Poetry Basics by Valerie Bodden

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by Kelly

by Kelly

Sometimes, even the easiest things can seem so complicated.

Take haiku. Perhaps you’re new to haiku and you’re seeking a simple description about the poetry form. You want to know where haiku comes from, what a haiku is supposed to mean, and if there are any rules you need to follow.

Do a Google search on any of these topics and you’re likely to become so overwhelmed that you’ll lose your creative drive to write your own haiku.

Enter a new book by Valerie Bodden called Poetry Basics: Haiku. The haiku title is just one in a series of four books by Bodden, all with the title Poetry Basics. The series also features concrete poetry, limericks and nursery rhymes.

The haiku version explains the origins of haiku in straight-forward language before explaining how the form was introduced to Western culture.

The book explains the reasoning behind the 5-7-5 syllable rule, but also opens the door to “free form” haiku, or uncounted English-language haiku, encouraging readers to first try out the counted version before revising their haiku into something less rigid.

The author also explains the concept of a cutting word, or a break in the language of the haiku that divides the poem into two ideas.

She also emphasises the nature theme then moves on to explain that a haiku which is not about nature, but about people instead, is called senryu.

While the book is clearly a picture book meant for children, I must say I found it helpful to read. It reminded me of haiku points I’d already known but had forgotten.

If you’re seeking a resource to explain the very basics of haiku, this might be a title to put on your library list — even if you are an adult.

And if you’re a teacher or a school librarian this is definitely a resource that would get used.

If you want more ideas about teaching haiku to kids, check out this listing of picture books on the topic:

Haiku Picture Books for Kids

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