D. Gale: Haiku 6

Posted: under Guest.
Tags: , , , September 28th, 2009

Lost Love:

Postcard from afar

Venice with sun low in sky

Lydia sends her love.

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4 Comments »

  • 1

    love the last line: lydia sends her love…
    kudos, beautiful haiku!

    johanna

    Comment by johanna — September 28, 2009 @ 3:58 am

  • 2

    Oh Lydia. What a great name. I like the alliteration here — Lydia, love.

    Comment by Kelly — September 28, 2009 @ 7:58 am

  • 3

    As I told Alison, if it had been anything but Lost Love with a time distance, Lydia would have been pronounced with three syllables, breaking the rules of your site. However, it is so long ago, that the pronunciation of her name has become more colloquial American in my mind, two syllables.

    Comment by D. Gale — September 28, 2009 @ 8:46 am

  • 4

    This is really a fantastic haiku. Very bittersweet and all in the image of a postcard. Beautiful work, D. Gale.

    Comment by Alison — September 28, 2009 @ 9:26 am

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