Haiku 1028: NaHaiWriMo 27 by Kelly

Posted: under Daily Haiku, Kelly's Haiku.
Tags: , , , , , February 28th, 2012

by Kelly

by Kelly

Facebook baby pics

alone, at my desk, I cry —

outside, freezing rain

 



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2 Comments »

  • 1

    Great haiku. Very contemporary. Personal, but a haiku that many will be able to relate to. If there is anything that can make one feel like crap when one is already feeling down, it is Facebook.

    Comment by Alison — March 1, 2012 @ 10:19 am

  • 2

    It’s amazing how much emotion and feeling you can fit into a haiku. Sometimes facebook is not easy to look at!

    Comment by Ariel — March 2, 2012 @ 4:55 am

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