Comments on: Haiku 117

By: Kelly

Kelly — Mon, 14 Feb 2011 13:56:57 +0000

Alison pens another period haiku:

Clair — Sun, 13 Feb 2011 12:59:44 +0000

sore breasts and good texts
periods are their music
pain and sense hold hands

Clair — Sun, 13 Feb 2011 12:53:51 +0000

a sentence needs it
as much as humanity
spotting and dotting

George — Mon, 14 Sep 2009 03:17:52 +0000

Period: A mark
Indicating the end of
A sentence or phrase.

George — Mon, 14 Sep 2009 03:13:42 +0000

Your bad periods
Caused many hard periods.
So bye. Period!

johanna — Tue, 26 May 2009 23:51:22 +0000

- redux -

the last egg has dropped
rush of blood a memory
mother atrophied.

i like this one better.

johanna — Tue, 26 May 2009 23:46:38 +0000

- period -

my last egg has dropped
rush of blood a memory
‘mom’ glands atrophied.

Hamed — Tue, 19 May 2009 21:51:43 +0000

Period,
Seems like crap,
It’s worse!

Roy — Thu, 14 May 2009 06:32:11 +0000

another time
she keeps me waiting
how I hate these periods

Leslie — Thu, 30 Apr 2009 03:36:51 +0000

I do not miss it
bloating, cramps and bitchiness
I love breastfeeding