Haiku 175

by Kelly

for a brief moment

each month I wonder — for him

is just us enough?

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1

poignant, Kelly, poignant!

Comment by Bonnie — June 24, 2009 @ 3:51 am
2

- the “try” syndrome -

live by just being

without any “trying to”

you and heart’s desire.

Comment by johanna — June 24, 2009 @ 9:38 am
3

Years ago I asked myself this question, too when we spent some long time trying. And then this caused other questions to surface such as - What are the reasons people choose to have children? And what is family?

This is a very deep and thoughtful haiku, Kelly.

Comment by Alison — June 24, 2009 @ 10:52 am
4

Wow, this haiku almost brought me to tears because lately I’ve been thinking the same thing.

Comment by Ariel — June 25, 2009 @ 5:09 am
5

Your haiku spoke to me…spoke to my soul. I’m childfree by decision, and I still wonder this at times too…

Thank you for sharing.

Comment by Cheryl — June 25, 2009 @ 6:20 pm
6

Thanks for the nice comments y’all!

Comment by Kelly — June 29, 2009 @ 7:45 am