Haiku 186

Posted: under Alison's Haiku, Daily Haiku.
Tags: , , July 5th, 2009

by Alison

by Alison

we hide and seek but

I can see her pink sandals

through the park bushes



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  • 1

    Ah. Pink sandals. All of mine are brown, black or white. Boring and practical. Designed to match pretty much anything. Maybe I need some pink ones. Jazz things up a bit.

    Comment by Kelly — July 6, 2009 @ 8:25 am

  • 2

    I love colorful shoes. I go with silver, hot pink and bright yellow. It’s probably because my wardrobe is so boaring - black, navy and brown. So color gives it some spice!

    Penny, on the other hand, could care less about pink. It’s purple, purple, purple.

    Comment by Alison — July 6, 2009 @ 10:36 am

  • 3

    Boaring? I’ve been spending too much time with wild animals. I meant to say, “boring”!

    Comment by Alison — July 6, 2009 @ 10:37 am

  • 4

    Alison,

    “Pink sandals” juxtaposed with the feeling of dark or shadowy “park bushes” creates a very nice contrast… colorful and lively experience in words…

    Bonnie

    Comment by Bonnie — July 7, 2009 @ 6:51 am

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