Posted: under Alison's Haiku, Daily Haiku. Tags: rain, summerJuly 15th, 2009
by Alison
sorting river stones
into piles of white and gray
days after the rain
every element in place…concise, yet evoking many images….impeccable haiku!
this may be the quintessential haiku, alison
vty johanna
Comment by johanna — July 15, 2009 @ 6:59 am
I agree with Johanna here. This is a nice haiku. Visual and purposeful.
Comment by Kelly — July 15, 2009 @ 7:53 am
Thank you, Johanna, and Kelly!
Comment by Alison — July 15, 2009 @ 9:29 am
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every element in place…concise, yet evoking many images….impeccable haiku!
this may be the quintessential haiku, alison
vty johanna
Comment by johanna — July 15, 2009 @ 6:59 am
I agree with Johanna here. This is a nice haiku. Visual and purposeful.
Comment by Kelly — July 15, 2009 @ 7:53 am
Thank you, Johanna, and Kelly!
Comment by Alison — July 15, 2009 @ 9:29 am