Haiku 196

Posted: under Alison's Haiku, Daily Haiku.
Tags: , July 15th, 2009

by Alison

by Alison

sorting river stones

into piles of white and gray

days after the rain



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  • 1

    every element in place…concise, yet evoking many images….impeccable haiku!

    this may be the quintessential haiku, alison

    vty johanna

    Comment by johanna — July 15, 2009 @ 6:59 am

  • 2

    I agree with Johanna here. This is a nice haiku. Visual and purposeful.

    Comment by Kelly — July 15, 2009 @ 7:53 am

  • 3

    Thank you, Johanna, and Kelly!

    Comment by Alison — July 15, 2009 @ 9:29 am

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