Haiku 197

Posted: under Daily Haiku, Kelly's Haiku.
Tags: , , , , , July 16th, 2009

by Kelly

by Kelly

driving, windows down

me, my two dogs, Neil Diamond –

four mouths wide open



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3 Comments »

  • 1

    Ha ha, very cute. I had to think for a second - who is the 4th mouth? And then of course I figured it out - Neil!

    Comment by Alison — July 16, 2009 @ 9:13 am

  • 2

    Yeah…I wasn’t too sure how this would read.

    I was driving, it was beautiful weather, Neil was on, I was singing and I was happy.

    My dogs were just overjoyed to be riding in the car. I looked up in my rear view mirror and caught of glimpse of both of them in the backseat with their mouths wide open, their tongues hanging out, slobber dripping and it struck me all of a sudden that they were just as happy in that moment as I was.

    Comment by Kelly — July 16, 2009 @ 9:24 am

  • 3

    I love that Neil becomes part of the car clan….

    Comment by Alison — July 16, 2009 @ 3:41 pm

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