Posted: under Alison's Haiku, Daily Haiku. Tags: children, home, summer, waterAugust 20th, 2009
by Alison
the hem of her dress
covered in river mud and
drying in the wind
Well then wash it!
: )
Comment by Kelly — August 20, 2009 @ 6:11 am
Alison,
Charming childhood image…
Bonnie
Comment by Bonnie — August 20, 2009 @ 10:09 pm
Kelly, Oh boy, did I wash it. Twice : )
Thanks, Bonnie!
Comment by Alison — August 21, 2009 @ 8:44 am
i cannot quite articulate why this one draws me so… this is really stunning haiku.
sometimes one just shines out. excellent wordplay
Comment by johanna — August 22, 2009 @ 4:15 am
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Well then wash it!
: )
Comment by Kelly — August 20, 2009 @ 6:11 am
Alison,
Charming childhood image…
Bonnie
Comment by Bonnie — August 20, 2009 @ 10:09 pm
Kelly, Oh boy, did I wash it. Twice : )
Thanks, Bonnie!
Comment by Alison — August 21, 2009 @ 8:44 am
i cannot quite articulate why
this one draws me so…
this is really stunning haiku.
sometimes one just shines out.
excellent wordplay
Comment by johanna — August 22, 2009 @ 4:15 am