Comments on: Haiku 240 http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-240/ Alison Kehler and Kelly Westhoff alternate turns posting one new haiku each day. Reviews of haiku-themed products, interviews with haiku authors and guest haiku artists. Thu, 09 Feb 2012 10:25:18 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.5 By: Gillena Cox http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-240/#comment-1098 Gillena Cox Sat, 29 Aug 2009 11:54:18 +0000 http://www.haikubytwo.com/?p=2514#comment-1098 coming to think of it they do make other sounds beside cook ka doo ling; ie heard roosters during the day and night; i love them best at dawn coming to think of it they do make other sounds beside cook ka doo ling; ie heard roosters during the day and night; i love them best at dawn

]]> By: johanna http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-240/#comment-1097 johanna Fri, 28 Aug 2009 22:07:13 +0000 http://www.haikubytwo.com/?p=2514#comment-1097 - roosters - amorous creatures 24/7, the squawks might be hens' protests. - roosters -

amorous creatures

24/7, the squawks

might be hens’ protests.

]]> By: Alison http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-240/#comment-1095 Alison Fri, 28 Aug 2009 15:32:01 +0000 http://www.haikubytwo.com/?p=2514#comment-1095 Siobhan, yes - my neighbors have roosters and hens. I was under the impression that roosters just cocka-doodled at sunrise but from what I have heard these past few days they can be noisy all day. But mostly it's pleasant. Kelly, thanks! I have to admit that I wrote this one in my head late last night while in bed. I was wondering if all those verbs were redundant but I felt that I needed them all to give the roosters at night experience. I wonder what they were doing.... Did they see a fox? Couldn't sleep? Siobhan, yes - my neighbors have roosters and hens. I was under the impression that roosters just cocka-doodled at sunrise but from what I have heard these past few days they can be noisy all day. But mostly it’s pleasant.

Kelly, thanks! I have to admit that I wrote this one in my head late last night while in bed. I was wondering if all those verbs were redundant but I felt that I needed them all to give the roosters at night experience.

I wonder what they were doing…. Did they see a fox? Couldn’t sleep?

]]> By: Kelly http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-240/#comment-1094 Kelly Fri, 28 Aug 2009 14:51:57 +0000 http://www.haikubytwo.com/?p=2514#comment-1094 I am in love with your strong action verbs. Listen to me....once an English teacher always an English teacher. I am in love with your strong action verbs. Listen to me….once an English teacher always an English teacher.

]]> By: siobhan http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-240/#comment-1093 siobhan Fri, 28 Aug 2009 14:25:38 +0000 http://www.haikubytwo.com/?p=2514#comment-1093 Did you really hear roosters in the middle of the night? Did you really hear roosters in the middle of the night?

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