I love the word “change”. It’s so active, so courageous, so optimistic and perfect for autumn. Change that we see in all the yellow, red and gold and also the change inside of us.
I love that you stick to the traditional form. Nice haiku. Fall or Color would have been nice in place of the change, too: fall is in the air, color is in the air.
I love the word “change”. It’s so active, so courageous, so optimistic and perfect for autumn. Change that we see in all the yellow, red and gold and also the change inside of us.
Comment by Alison — September 30, 2009 @ 6:28 am
I love that you stick to the traditional form. Nice haiku. Fall or Color would have been nice in place of the change, too: fall is in the air, color is in the air.
Comment by haikublog — September 30, 2009 @ 7:19 am