Posted: under Daily Haiku, Kelly's Haiku. Tags: Autumn, color, fall, religion, treesOctober 24th, 2009
by Kelly
the bonfires of hell
do not crackle crimson like
this lone burning bush
I’ll be the first to comment on this one and try my hand:
Trees at Cedar Lake
are once again beautiful
in this fall season.
Comment by Bill W — October 24, 2009 @ 5:39 am
stunning imagery… sounds of “crackle crimson”. what an excellent haiku…applause!
Comment by johanna — October 24, 2009 @ 8:15 am
Nice! And what’s also cool about this is that it feels like a very subtle very autumn Halloween haiku.
Comment by Alison — October 24, 2009 @ 9:10 am
Halloweenish, huh? I saw the whole thing as being “biblical” with the bonfires of hell and the burning bush…
Thanks for the Cedar Lake image ! : )
Comment by Kelly — October 25, 2009 @ 7:41 am
Oh, but Halloween is so biblical! I have a whole reading and worksheet on it from my ESL days. Oh, and with cute little Halloween drawings, of course. I should send you a copy : )
Comment by Alison — October 25, 2009 @ 12:30 pm
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I’ll be the first to comment on this one and try my hand:
Trees at Cedar Lake
are once again beautiful
in this fall season.
Comment by Bill W — October 24, 2009 @ 5:39 am
stunning imagery…
sounds of “crackle crimson”.
what an excellent haiku…applause!
Comment by johanna — October 24, 2009 @ 8:15 am
Nice! And what’s also cool about this is that it feels like a very subtle very autumn Halloween haiku.
Comment by Alison — October 24, 2009 @ 9:10 am
Halloweenish, huh? I saw the whole thing as being “biblical” with the bonfires of hell and the burning bush…
Thanks for the Cedar Lake image ! : )
Comment by Kelly — October 25, 2009 @ 7:41 am
Oh, but Halloween is so biblical! I have a whole reading and worksheet on it from my ESL days. Oh, and with cute little Halloween drawings, of course. I should send you a copy : )
Comment by Alison — October 25, 2009 @ 12:30 pm