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  I like all the “nos”. And the fact that the second line both starts and ends with “no.”

  I’ve written a couple haiku like that, where a line starts and ends with the same word. It feels clever and cool, doesn’t it?

  Comment by Kelly — October 25, 2009 @ 7:40 am

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  Yes, and I love the visual element of a haiku, really all poems but specifically haiku since they are so short. The shape and pattern of a haiku poem can be very playful.

  Comment by Alison — October 25, 2009 @ 12:10 pm

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