I need something else,
something different, something new,
something needs to change.
Posted: under Daily Haiku, Kelly's Haiku.
Tags: changeNovember 1st, 2009
I need something else,
something different, something new,
something needs to change.
i like the repeated ’some’..things
very nice poem…
rhythmic tone is pleasant to the ear.
Comment by johanna — November 2, 2009 @ 5:02 am
Excellent haiku! Expressive and rolls of the tongue well… also very true. Everyone needs something new from time to time!
Bonnie
Comment by Bonnie — November 2, 2009 @ 5:44 am