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  Ohhh, I like that–late fall’s lullaby. Very nice!

  Comment by Gisele — November 7, 2009 @ 4:43 am

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  i like’late fall lullaby’ alot.
  you found the perfect image…
  this is a great haiku!!

  Comment by johanna — November 7, 2009 @ 5:12 am

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  And I love “ping-ping”. This is a very pleasing haiku, it just feels good to read this one.

  Comment by Alison — November 7, 2009 @ 9:12 am

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  alludes the senses in a very comforting way

  Comment by Gillena Cox — November 7, 2009 @ 1:35 pm

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  This is absolutely full of beautiful imagery, ode to an early winter day…

  Bonnie

  Comment by Bonnie — November 7, 2009 @ 10:49 pm

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  Thanks, y’all!

  Comment by Kelly — November 10, 2009 @ 7:47 am

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