Comments on: Haiku 344 http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-344/ Alison Kehler and Kelly Westhoff alternate turns posting one new haiku each day. Reviews of haiku-themed products, interviews with haiku authors and guest haiku artists. Fri, 18 May 2012 09:41:12 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.5 By: Bonnie http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-344/#comment-1495 Bonnie Sun, 13 Dec 2009 11:48:45 +0000 http://www.haikubytwo.com/?p=3335#comment-1495 Great imagery! Great imagery!

]]> By: johanna http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-344/#comment-1473 johanna Wed, 09 Dec 2009 11:42:40 +0000 http://www.haikubytwo.com/?p=3335#comment-1473 - neighborhood - we only realize population density after a snowfall - neighborhood -

we only realize

population density

after a snowfall

]]> By: Kelly http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-344/#comment-1472 Kelly Tue, 08 Dec 2009 23:33:33 +0000 http://www.haikubytwo.com/?p=3335#comment-1472 Did you ever finish reading The Haiku Apprentice? I didn't know about the "break" until I read that and I must say...she described it and explained it so gracefully. It totally made sense and it was after I read that I really started trying to work with it. Did you ever finish reading The Haiku Apprentice?

I didn’t know about the “break” until I read that and I must say…she described it and explained it so gracefully. It totally made sense and it was after I read that I really started trying to work with it.

]]> By: Alison http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-344/#comment-1471 Alison Tue, 08 Dec 2009 19:54:13 +0000 http://www.haikubytwo.com/?p=3335#comment-1471 Thanks Kelly, Gisele. Yes, we've had one 5 inch snow storm so far and I can't believe we had ours before yours, Kelly! But I think you are sure to beat me on the cold front this winter... Thanks Kelly, Gisele.

Yes, we’ve had one 5 inch snow storm so far and I can’t believe we had ours before yours, Kelly! But I think you are sure to beat me on the cold front this winter…

]]> By: Gisele http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-344/#comment-1468 Gisele Tue, 08 Dec 2009 19:12:51 +0000 http://www.haikubytwo.com/?p=3335#comment-1468 That is really nice, Alison! I also love the "backyard brims with life" line. Gisele :) That is really nice, Alison! I also love the “backyard brims with life” line.

Gisele :)

]]> By: Kelly http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-344/#comment-1467 Kelly Tue, 08 Dec 2009 14:42:50 +0000 http://www.haikubytwo.com/?p=3335#comment-1467 This is nice. I like "backyard brims with life". Last winter, I tried several times to write a haiku about animal tracks in the snow and how they reveal life to which you were unaware, but I never got one that I liked. I like this one, though. So you've had your first big snow? Ours is coming tonight. We've has dustings, but nothing substantial. But tonight.....oh, the forecasters are all a twitter. This is nice. I like “backyard brims with life”.

Last winter, I tried several times to write a haiku about animal tracks in the snow and how they reveal life to which you were unaware, but I never got one that I liked.

I like this one, though.

So you’ve had your first big snow? Ours is coming tonight. We’ve has dustings, but nothing substantial. But tonight…..oh, the forecasters are all a twitter.

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