Haiku 394

Posted: under Alison's Haiku, Daily Haiku.
Tags: , , , January 29th, 2010

by Alison

by Alison

today’s sun is not

as bright as yesterday’s moon -

the wind blows fiercely



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4 Comments »

  • 1

    palest waking sun

    opens reluctant eye, and

    there’s no warmth at all…

    Comment by johanna — January 29, 2010 @ 6:03 am

  • 2

    nicely compared your yesterday/today

    Comment by Gillena Cox — January 29, 2010 @ 6:03 am

  • 3

    I stopped and noticed the moon yesterday afternoon. It was almost full and it made me think back to my haiku just a couple weeks ago about the tiny fingernail clipping of a moon. Somehow, as I’ve been going about my business, the moon too has been going about its own.

    Comment by Kelly — January 29, 2010 @ 8:38 am

  • 4

    You are so good at creating a moment. Great job!

    Bonnie

    Comment by Bonnie — January 30, 2010 @ 5:52 am

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