Haiku 396

Posted: under Alison's Haiku, Daily Haiku.
Tags: , January 31st, 2010

by Alison

by Alison

layers of ice crack

beneath our feet as we search

for our parked car



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4 Comments »

  • 1

    Even south of the Mason-Dixon, I know how you feel!

    Comment by mary hatch bailey — January 31, 2010 @ 7:47 am

  • 2

    Searching for your car in a big mall parking lot in the middle of winter is not a choice activity. Especially in the dark.

    Comment by Kelly — February 1, 2010 @ 8:43 am

  • 3

    Growing up in Colorado, I am soooo familiar with this feeling. Nice job!

    Bonnie

    Comment by Bonnie — February 1, 2010 @ 9:06 am

  • 4

    Thanks, all. I managed to leave the word “snow” out of this one. Honestly, it is becoming hard for me to write a haiku that doesn’t reference the low thermostat!

    Comment by Alison — February 1, 2010 @ 10:41 am

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