Posted: under Alison's Haiku, Daily Haiku. Tags: driving, winterJanuary 31st, 2010
by Alison
layers of ice crack
beneath our feet as we search
for our parked car
Even south of the Mason-Dixon, I know how you feel!
Comment by mary hatch bailey — January 31, 2010 @ 7:47 am
Searching for your car in a big mall parking lot in the middle of winter is not a choice activity. Especially in the dark.
Comment by Kelly — February 1, 2010 @ 8:43 am
Growing up in Colorado, I am soooo familiar with this feeling. Nice job!
Bonnie
Comment by Bonnie — February 1, 2010 @ 9:06 am
Thanks, all. I managed to leave the word “snow” out of this one. Honestly, it is becoming hard for me to write a haiku that doesn’t reference the low thermostat!
Comment by Alison — February 1, 2010 @ 10:41 am
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Even south of the Mason-Dixon, I know how you feel!
Comment by mary hatch bailey — January 31, 2010 @ 7:47 am
Searching for your car in a big mall parking lot in the middle of winter is not a choice activity. Especially in the dark.
Comment by Kelly — February 1, 2010 @ 8:43 am
Growing up in Colorado, I am soooo familiar with this feeling. Nice job!
Bonnie
Comment by Bonnie — February 1, 2010 @ 9:06 am
Thanks, all. I managed to leave the word “snow” out of this one. Honestly, it is becoming hard for me to write a haiku that doesn’t reference the low thermostat!
Comment by Alison — February 1, 2010 @ 10:41 am