dawn plays coy with day
vowing to take things slowly
in this month of love
Posted: under Daily Haiku, Kelly's Haiku.
Tags: day, February, light, love, sun, winterFebruary 5th, 2010
dawn plays coy with day
vowing to take things slowly
in this month of love
nice one, flirtatious day breaks
Comment by Gillena Cox — February 5, 2010 @ 8:07 am
great first line…really nice wordplay!
your dry spell must have gotten wet…
Comment by johanna — February 5, 2010 @ 8:53 am
A cute and flirty valentine of a winter haiku. Love it!
Comment by Alison — February 5, 2010 @ 8:54 am
@ Gillena — thanks, I was having fun thinking of a flirtatious dawn.
@ Johanna — well…we’ll see how long the “wet” spell lasts.
@ Alison — I was liking my “seasonal” reference of the month of love. Sometimes, don’t you just impress yourself with your wittiness?
Comment by Kelly — February 6, 2010 @ 11:45 am