Haiku 401

Posted: under Daily Haiku, Kelly's Haiku.
Tags: , , , , , February 5th, 2010

by Kelly

by Kelly

dawn plays coy with day

vowing to take things slowly

in this month of love



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4 Comments »

  • 1

    nice one, flirtatious day breaks

    Comment by Gillena Cox — February 5, 2010 @ 8:07 am

  • 2

    great first line…really nice wordplay!
    your dry spell must have gotten wet…

    Comment by johanna — February 5, 2010 @ 8:53 am

  • 3

    A cute and flirty valentine of a winter haiku. Love it!

    Comment by Alison — February 5, 2010 @ 8:54 am

  • 4

    @ Gillena — thanks, I was having fun thinking of a flirtatious dawn.

    @ Johanna — well…we’ll see how long the “wet” spell lasts.

    @ Alison — I was liking my “seasonal” reference of the month of love. Sometimes, don’t you just impress yourself with your wittiness?

    Comment by Kelly — February 6, 2010 @ 11:45 am

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