by Kelly
Afterward, he drifts
to sleep. I stroke his hair and
think of poetry.
Haiku 421
Posted: under Daily Haiku, Kelly's Haiku.
Tags: hair, husbands, marriage, poetry, sleep, touchFebruary 25th, 2010
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I like the subtlety of “afterward” and the peaceful feeling of this haiku. Nice love haiku.
Comment by Alison — February 25, 2010 @ 12:17 pm
i really enjoyed this one!
subtle + erotic + sweet
very good poem, kelly..
Comment by johanna — February 26, 2010 @ 3:29 am
surely you do good justice to the 5-7-5 classical style of this genre
another fine one
much love
gillena
Comment by Gillena Cox — February 26, 2010 @ 4:17 am