Haiku 427

by Kelly

I tromp through the snow

seeded bird feeder in hand –

I’ve become my dad.

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Twice I left the birds
The first was when I wintered
Father in his nest

Comment by Christopher Title — March 3, 2010 @ 8:29 am
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Hey Chris! Nice to see one of your comments in haiku form. My father is also currently wintering. Perhaps that’s why I took to the bird seed. Someone’s got to see that the critters get their meals.

Thanks for stopping by. I hope all is going well in Ai world and that all your students have mastered the fine arts of correctly-placed commas and appropriately-cited quotes!

Comment by Kelly — March 3, 2010 @ 9:14 am
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good one; particularly like the surprise of Line 3

Comment by Gillena Cox — March 3, 2010 @ 11:35 am
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I love this!

Bonnie

Comment by Bonnie — March 3, 2010 @ 10:24 pm
5

Kelly,
That’s not so bad — between becoming an NPR nerd and a bird feeder, I guess I’ve given you quite a legacy! The birdies need food in the winter — good for you.
Dad

Comment by Bill — March 4, 2010 @ 2:35 pm