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  sharp scent on march wind

  cut pines bleeding pungent sap

  loggers in the woods.

  Comment by johanna — March 4, 2010 @ 3:58 am

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  “Split,” “uprooted,” “broken,” all make this haiku so fragrant with pine.

  Comment by Bonnie — March 4, 2010 @ 5:25 am

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  Fantastic imagery. I feel like I’m in the forest walking on a carpet of pine.

  Comment by mary hatch bailey — March 6, 2010 @ 4:51 am

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