kelly,
you write the most open, subtly erotic haiku.
i enjoy them alot - and i’m inspired to write more
personally, as opposed to the “traditional” observation poems.
what i like best about your site is the “me” in both
your haiku. our lives are just as interesting as a
’single blossom on a branch’ etc. etc.
It’s made an impression on me. I highly recommend it! Many of its little poems are so erotically charged you just sit and wonder that the poet was able to cram all that in to so few words!
kelly,
you write the most open, subtly erotic haiku.
i enjoy them alot - and i’m inspired to write more
personally, as opposed to the “traditional” observation poems.
what i like best about your site is the “me” in both
your haiku. our lives are just as interesting as a
’single blossom on a branch’ etc. etc.
thankyou! johanna
Comment by johanna — March 11, 2010 @ 5:40 am
Kindness and intimacy. So sweet and tender. A beautiful marriage haiku. I like that in this one W is the subject and the mood is so soft.
Comment by Alison — March 11, 2010 @ 7:11 am
I’ve been reading a little book called Love Haiku that Alison recently reviewed:
http://www.haikubytwo.com/love-haiku-japanese-poems-of-yearning-passion-and-remembrance/
It’s made an impression on me. I highly recommend it! Many of its little poems are so erotically charged you just sit and wonder that the poet was able to cram all that in to so few words!
Comment by Kelly — March 11, 2010 @ 7:43 am