Haiku 435

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Tags: , , , , , , March 11th, 2010

by Kelly

by Kelly

before loving me

he speaks softly to both dogs –

outside, winter thaws



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  • 1

    kelly,
    you write the most open, subtly erotic haiku.
    i enjoy them alot - and i’m inspired to write more
    personally, as opposed to the “traditional” observation poems.
    what i like best about your site is the “me” in both
    your haiku. our lives are just as interesting as a
    ’single blossom on a branch’ etc. etc.

    thankyou! johanna

    Comment by johanna — March 11, 2010 @ 5:40 am

  • 2

    Kindness and intimacy. So sweet and tender. A beautiful marriage haiku. I like that in this one W is the subject and the mood is so soft.

    Comment by Alison — March 11, 2010 @ 7:11 am

  • 3

    I’ve been reading a little book called Love Haiku that Alison recently reviewed:

    http://www.haikubytwo.com/love-haiku-japanese-poems-of-yearning-passion-and-remembrance/

    It’s made an impression on me. I highly recommend it! Many of its little poems are so erotically charged you just sit and wonder that the poet was able to cram all that in to so few words!

    Comment by Kelly — March 11, 2010 @ 7:43 am

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