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  Oh, wow! Well that’s a big story in a tiny little poem! I can just imagine all the ways this unfolded….

  Comment by Alison — March 15, 2010 @ 10:40 am

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  interesting theme; so much left to be said though
  maybe a haiku series???

  much love
  gillena

  Comment by Gillena Cox — March 15, 2010 @ 3:34 pm

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  It’s like a haiku soap opera!

  Comment by Ariel — March 16, 2010 @ 5:47 am

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  very sophisticated imagery, kelly.
  mysterious - suggestive
  i like it !

  Comment by johanna — March 16, 2010 @ 6:19 am

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  Thanks, y’all. I’ glad you like my haiku about spring gossip. Good gossip is just so hard to resist, isn’t it?

  But again…this was something I wanted to write about for a couple of weeks. I just wasn’t making any headway. It did seem too big to squeeze into 17 syllables. But then…after reading Love Haiku, I found a way through it.

  http://www.haikubytwo.com/love-haiku-japanese-poems-of-yearning-passion-and-remembrance/

  Alison…I totally dig that book! Thanks for much for recommending it!

  Comment by Kelly — March 16, 2010 @ 7:32 am

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