Haiku 442

Posted: under Alison's Haiku, Daily Haiku.
Tags: March 18th, 2010

by Alison

by Alison

a dark starless night -

I step into shadows not

sure where the ground is



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  • 1

    I started a blog this afternoon. Nothing that interesting, but I did post two haikus (they’re on poem). I was so proud of myself. I’m hoping to network w/ other Etsins.

    Comment by Anna in AK — March 18, 2010 @ 1:56 pm

  • 2

    Oh, congratulations for the start of your blog! Blogging is such an amazing way to share with others and meet new people, you are going to have a great time.

    And really lovely haiku! The two that you posted have personality and give me a glimpse into your life in Alaska. I hope you write more : )

    Best of luck!

    Comment by Alison — March 18, 2010 @ 4:45 pm

  • 3

    Beautifully descriptive, Alison!

    Comment by Bonnie — March 19, 2010 @ 12:37 am

  • 4

    This is a nice image. I like the idea of literally not knowing where the ground it, but it also carries the figurative idea of not being grounded. Nicely done.

    Comment by Kelly — March 22, 2010 @ 12:42 pm

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