Haiku 449

Posted: under Daily Haiku, Kelly's Haiku.
Tags: , , , , , March 25th, 2010

by Kelly

by Kelly

dude in a Che shirt

smoking “herbs” on the beach asks

if we’re interested



Older Posts | Newer Posts

8 Comments »

  • 1

    I am not into herbs but it is tempting :-)

    Comment by Chris — March 25, 2010 @ 6:19 am

  • 2

    Kelly, your first Che haiku! I love it!

    Comment by Alison — March 25, 2010 @ 7:14 am

  • 3

    Would Che approve?
    Revolutions aren’t sparked by
    smoking joints beachside

    Comment by Jen — March 25, 2010 @ 8:26 am

  • 4

    kelly, i liked this one very much.
    i strive for observational haiku moments.

    jen, your haiku says it all!

    vty,johanna

    Comment by johanna — March 25, 2010 @ 10:39 am

  • 5

    . . .first time I have ever seen herb in the plural form.

    Comment by D. Gale — March 25, 2010 @ 2:34 pm

  • 6

    This is good!!!! I can picture both you and Quang!!

    Comment by catherine — March 25, 2010 @ 4:40 pm

  • 7

    Such enthusiasm for my Che haiku! I’m impressed. I was thinking this would be one of those that gets posted and nobody comments on because they aren’t too sure what to make of it!

    Perhaps Che has more appeal than I thought. Either that, or the “herbs” have more appeal than I thought. : )

    And Jen…I beg to differ. Someone has to dream up a revolution before they can take action. Perhaps “herbs” on the beach facilitate the dreaming of revolution….

    Comment by Kelly — March 26, 2010 @ 10:24 am

  • 8

    Okay Kelly, if by revolution you mean nachos… :)

    Comment by Jen — March 29, 2010 @ 1:25 pm

RSS feed for comments on this post. TrackBack URL

Leave a comment

Currently you have JavaScript disabled. In order to post comments, please make sure JavaScript and Cookies are enabled, and reload the page.