Haiku 507

Posted: under Daily Haiku, Kelly's Haiku.
Tags: , , , , , , , , , , May 22nd, 2010

by Kelly

by Kelly

A stiff wing rises

through the grass. Mangled Robin.

Damn cat. What a shame.



  • 1

    Aw. . .what a cute kitty.

    Comment by D. Gale — May 22, 2010 @ 9:26 am

  • 2

    Of course, D. Gale, you would side with the cat! : )

    Comment by Kelly — May 22, 2010 @ 1:51 pm

  • 3

    This is a fun haiku. And I know it is odd for me to say that since this haiku is about a dead bird. But I like the image of the wing. And I really like the way you broke up the haiku into 4 sentences. I don’t know that I have ever seen that before in haiku and it aids the drama! Yes, that damn cat. Evan a cat lover like myself will say that when a cat kills a feathered animal.

    Comment by Alison — May 22, 2010 @ 3:33 pm

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