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  This is so poignant, Kelly. Wonderful haiku.

  Comment by Alison — June 13, 2010 @ 5:42 am

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  i feltt a wee bit sad on reading ‘trampled ‘ peonies

  Comment by Gillena Cox — June 13, 2010 @ 8:42 am

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  Thanks, ladies. I was going for an aura of sadness — the idea that you haven’t lived up to your dreams for yourself does make one a bit sad. I’m glad the image of trampled peonies conveyed my idea.

  Comment by Kelly — June 14, 2010 @ 6:31 pm

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