Haiku 552

Posted: under Alison's Haiku, Daily Haiku.
Tags: , , , July 6th, 2010

by Alison

by Alison

mixing ice cream soup

she is becoming her own girl

separate from me



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3 Comments »

  • 1

    I like this haiku. It’s very bittersweet.

    Comment by Kelly — July 7, 2010 @ 2:10 pm

  • 2

    Thank you, Kelly.

    Comment by Alison — July 7, 2010 @ 5:12 pm

  • 3

    [...] one, by Catherine J. S. Lee, is another favorite. I love that it gets personal (we like to do that at haikubytwo) and I love the way here the personal melds with the seasonal. [...]

    Pingback by Carribean Kigo Kukai and Modern Haiku — August 1, 2010 @ 3:03 am

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