Comments on: Haiku 602 http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-602/ Alison Kehler and Kelly Westhoff alternate turns posting one new haiku each day. Reviews of haiku-themed products, interviews with haiku authors and guest haiku artists. Mon, 21 May 2012 22:04:04 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.5 By: Alison http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-602/#comment-2434 Alison Thu, 26 Aug 2010 19:15:17 +0000 http://www.haikubytwo.com/?p=4837#comment-2434 Thanks everyone! Yes, I think this is my first shorter haiku. And Gisele, I used your advice -I initially composed this as a longer haiku and then thought it would be a good one to experiment with paring it down. Thanks everyone! Yes, I think this is my first shorter haiku. And Gisele, I used your advice -I initially composed this as a longer haiku and then thought it would be a good one to experiment with paring it down.

]]> By: johanna http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-602/#comment-2433 johanna Thu, 26 Aug 2010 14:14:22 +0000 http://www.haikubytwo.com/?p=4837#comment-2433 a very nice haiku, alison. isn't it great to write unfettered by the traditional count? it chases out the often- contrived extra syllables. i enjoy the barest, bare bones! a very nice haiku, alison.

isn’t it great to write unfettered
by the traditional count?
it chases out the often-
contrived extra syllables.
i enjoy the barest, bare bones!

]]> By: Gisele http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-602/#comment-2431 Gisele Wed, 25 Aug 2010 20:58:38 +0000 http://www.haikubytwo.com/?p=4837#comment-2431 Ohhhh, is this your first shorter haiku, Alison? I REALLY like it! :) Ohhhh, is this your first shorter haiku, Alison? I REALLY like it! :)

]]> By: Kelly http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-602/#comment-2430 Kelly Wed, 25 Aug 2010 18:22:05 +0000 http://www.haikubytwo.com/?p=4837#comment-2430 Alison is stretching her haiku wings! Short, crisp. I like it. Alison is stretching her haiku wings! Short, crisp. I like it.

]]> By: Chris http://www.haikubytwo.com/haiku-602/#comment-2427 Chris Wed, 25 Aug 2010 13:36:02 +0000 http://www.haikubytwo.com/?p=4837#comment-2427 Good one Alison, thank god the Summer is getting over. The fall is going to be beautiful. Good one Alison, thank god the Summer is getting over. The fall is going to be beautiful.

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