by Kelly
facing each other –
he breathes in my stale exhale
and I breathe in his
Haiku 629
Posted: under Daily Haiku, Kelly's Haiku.
Tags: air, breath, husbands, marriageSeptember 21st, 2010
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I love this haiku. It’s such an interesting image and really speaks of an aspect of marriage / couples. Well done!
Comment by Alison — September 21, 2010 @ 5:47 am
Thanks, Alison. : )
Comment by Kelly — September 22, 2010 @ 5:11 am
I agree with Alison, this is what love and marriage is all about. Cheers.
Comment by Chris — October 25, 2010 @ 7:13 am