Haiku 64

by Alison

with a sprained ankle

she turns her toy upside down

and walks on her knees

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Oh, poor Penny! This is pathetically sweet. Has she healed yet?

Comment by Kelly — March 5, 2009 @ 6:25 am
2

Now she is walking. Limping. It took seeing other kids for her to want to walk but at first she didn’t want me to see. If I would look away for a second she would stand and then sit right back down when I looked again. I think she liked being a baby for a few days and then realized it was getting a bit boring.

Comment by Alison — March 5, 2009 @ 7:11 am
3

I’d be able to see the picture more clearly if I knew what sort of toy you mean. The moment itself is promising.

Comment by Bill K — March 6, 2009 @ 7:46 pm
4

Thanks for the feedback, Bill. Yes, imagery could be developed here…

Comment by Alison — March 6, 2009 @ 10:35 pm