Haiku 799

Posted: under Daily Haiku, Kelly's Haiku.
Tags: , , , , , , , , March 12th, 2011

by Kelly

by Kelly

“You’re almost 40,”

he says, “and you’re so pretty.”

the icicles drip



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3 Comments »

  • 1

    Aw, so sweet! And the end of winter kigo fits beautifully here.

    Comment by Alison — March 12, 2011 @ 2:12 pm

  • 2

    I liked the idea of starting with the idea of getting older but then ending with the idea of spring, or youth.

    Comment by Kelly — March 14, 2011 @ 3:50 pm

  • 3

    Yes, I like that too. It feels fresh and warming. 40 sounds nice here :)

    Comment by Alison — March 14, 2011 @ 4:05 pm

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