Posted: under Daily Haiku, Kelly's Haiku. Tags: age, beauty, husbands, icicles, intimacy, marriage, spring, thaw, winterMarch 12th, 2011
by Kelly
“You’re almost 40,”
he says, “and you’re so pretty.”
the icicles drip
Aw, so sweet! And the end of winter kigo fits beautifully here.
Comment by Alison — March 12, 2011 @ 2:12 pm
I liked the idea of starting with the idea of getting older but then ending with the idea of spring, or youth.
Comment by Kelly — March 14, 2011 @ 3:50 pm
Yes, I like that too. It feels fresh and warming. 40 sounds nice here
Comment by Alison — March 14, 2011 @ 4:05 pm
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Aw, so sweet! And the end of winter kigo fits beautifully here.
Comment by Alison — March 12, 2011 @ 2:12 pm
I liked the idea of starting with the idea of getting older but then ending with the idea of spring, or youth.
Comment by Kelly — March 14, 2011 @ 3:50 pm
Yes, I like that too. It feels fresh and warming. 40 sounds nice here
Comment by Alison — March 14, 2011 @ 4:05 pm