- evening -
seven deer forage
among the privet hedgerows
fresh red clover blooms
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Joanne Dibble: Haiku 6
Posted: under Guest.
Tags: animals, Joanne DibbleJune 27th, 2009
This is a very magical image and I like the number “seven”. And now… I can almost imagine this sort of magic around me. This haiku makes me very happy to be where I am now. Thank you!
Comment by Alison — June 28, 2009 @ 2:06 pm
thankyou for all your insightful comments, alison.
embrace the country life; it has brought me more beauty than i ever imagined.
i have enjoyed my guest stint and thank you both very much.
is there future re-guesting?
i practice daily on twitter (ndawnis) sending haiku out into the wind…
this is much more like grad-school, with feedback from fellow haiku-ers
obviously i relish the dialog on your site! vty, joanne
Comment by johanna — June 29, 2009 @ 2:04 am
Line one opens us to an evening setting; its interesting the way you introduced ‘fresh’ in Line 3 to surprise us as we read of the read about the red clovers in bloom
Enjoyed this haiku very much
Comment by Gillena Cox — July 18, 2009 @ 1:02 pm