Aug 12

Haiku 589

Posted: under Daily Haiku, Kelly's Haiku.
Tags: Autumn, fall, heat, leaves, red, sumac, summer, treesAugust 12th, 2010

Ack! I can’t decide on the order of today’s haiku. What do you think? Help me decide… lone red sumac leaf — in the midst of summer’s heat autumn approaches or… lone red sumac leaf in the midst of summer’s heat — autumn approaches or… autumn approaches – in the midst of summer’s heat lone red sumac leaf var addthis_pub = 'haikubytwo'; var addthis_language = 'en';var addthis_options = [...] [...more]

by Kelly

Ack!

I can’t decide on the order of today’s haiku.

What do you think?

Help me decide…

lone red sumac leaf —

in the midst of summer’s heat

autumn approaches

or…

lone red sumac leaf

in the midst of summer’s heat —

autumn approaches

or…

autumn approaches –

in the midst of summer’s heat

lone red sumac leaf

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